Saturday, February 26, 2011

Speechless

Jis mitti ka tu bana hai
wo mitti bhi meri hai
aur jisme tu mil jayega
wo khaakh bhi

Jo keh paya tu
har wo lafz bhi mera hai
aur jo sehem gaya tujhme
wo armaan-e-bebaak bhi

Bekhudi me gumshuda tu
tu bhi mera hai
aur jise chahta hai tu
wo teri najaat bhi

Kaynaat ka har jarra mera hai
Ye Jannat aur ye Dojakh bhi
Har jaanib dhoond mujhe diwane
mai tujhme hun, aur tere saath bhi

9 comments:

  1. truth be told....i cud not understand it....hence all i can say is superbly written.....

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  2. i like your honesty in the first line...but i like you second line better! :P

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  3. Speechless! I second with Rohit's comment :P Kaun kis mein hain, kutch samajh nahi aaya.

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  4. :D i don't blame u guys....neither have i understood a word :P

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  5. Gunjan, this is a beautiful Urdu shayari. If you have done it then it is really very good. You must publish your collection. GREAT WORK!!!

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  6. Yes sir! I have written every word you'll find on this blog...... n publish my collection?.....i don't think that's a good idea :P first i'll have to spend money in finding a publisher and then i'll have to spend money buying my own books :P:D...kyunki aur toh koi lega nahi :P

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  7. Hmmmm.....acha he......bahot accha he......baho bohot acha he.....but I want to know....some of these words do really exists or bas tune pheke he...??
    Jokes apart nice work.

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  8. :D:D:D han re exist karte hain! kafi urdu research kee hai before incorporating them into my shayari :D ainvehi hi nai :P
    anyway ...thanks a lot! :):):)

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