Friday, September 23, 2011

Coming to the Sea!


Dry art the clouds
And dry art the rains
Dry is the dew drop
On the grass blade

Fake art the greetings
And fake art the praises
Fake is the smile
Worn by a chirpy facade

Only thou my sea hast
Both honesty and waters bountiful
And hast a heart deep enough
To embrace me.

If thou be my friend
We both shalt rest in peace
My sinful anguish
And thy untamed tempest 
Shalt both ease

3 comments:

  1. Good work, Gunjan, You have a way with words and they are deep. One has to think hard to really get all the meaning behind them. More like surreal paintings. tumhare lekhan mein bahut gahraayi hai, sochta hoon, kitna samay aur kitna kuchh chintan manan karna padaa hoga yeh sab likhne mein. Good work, please keep it up.

    also make it more positive and inspirational, rather than abstract and dry

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    1. Thanks a ton Sir! That's very encouraging really. Please check out my latest post if whenever you find time...it's in German, but still I would want your reaction on it :)

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