Dry art the clouds
And dry art the rains
Dry is the dew drop
On the grass blade
Fake art the greetings
And fake art the praises
Fake is the smile
Worn by a chirpy facade
Only thou my sea hast
Both honesty and waters bountiful
And hast a heart deep enough
To embrace me.
If thou be my friend
We both shalt rest in peace
My sinful anguish
And thy untamed tempest
Shalt both ease
Good work, Gunjan, You have a way with words and they are deep. One has to think hard to really get all the meaning behind them. More like surreal paintings. tumhare lekhan mein bahut gahraayi hai, sochta hoon, kitna samay aur kitna kuchh chintan manan karna padaa hoga yeh sab likhne mein. Good work, please keep it up.
ReplyDeletealso make it more positive and inspirational, rather than abstract and dry
Thanks a ton Sir! That's very encouraging really. Please check out my latest post if whenever you find time...it's in German, but still I would want your reaction on it :)
Deletenice one gunju....
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